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Modifications apportées à l'étape #20

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[* black] Pulling this mess out is a destructive procedure. We rip out some soldered connectors to get our first real look at the S1.
[* black] Despite [http://www.benzinga.com/analyst-ratings/analyst-color/15/03/5319245/expert-why-apple-watch-will-be-apples-most-upgradeable-p|rumors|new_window=true] (and hopes) of an upgradable product—the difficulty of removing the S1 alone casts serious doubt on the idea of simply swapping out the internals.
-[* black] But it's not an unobstructed look.
-[* black] That silvery S1 emblazoned cap isn't a cap at all, but a solid block of resin, hiding its treasures deep within.
+[* black] But this first look is not an unobstructed look—that silvery S1 emblazoned cap isn't a cap at all. It's a solid block of plasticy resin, hiding its treasures deep within.